River of Ice

by @oaksnprairie

Liner Notes

My husband suggested "River of Ice" as a prompt.

We were in Quebec City recently where the St. Lawrence is full of ice floes, a ferry that plows through them to the other side, and some crazy individuals practicing for a "canoe race" across--mostly running across the floes carrying the canoe and pausing when they reached open water.

I have been feeling adrift this winter, so the metaphor feels apt.

Lyrics

River of Ice

I’m walking a river of ice Going where no one should go I don’t know how I got here Going with the flow

When the tide comes in Pushes the floes upstream I, too, fight the drift Trying to find my dream

Pushed by wind and current Ice sheets overlap and stack Or suddenly pull apart Revealing water cold, dark, black

If I took the ferry, crossing shore to shore Life would be predictable, but there could be more

When the tide goes out Pulling the ice to the sea Far beyond the horizon Where I’ll end up eventually

I’m walking a river of ice Going where no one should go I don’t know how I got here I’m going with the flow

Guess I’ll go with the flow

Comments

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What a lovely song! Beautiful and feels relatable :-)

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Very very nice. Honestly a favorite, possibly an all timer for me. It's got me quite sentimental and I'm not sure why, but I like it very much

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Great metaphor and a lovely song….

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What a wonderful extended metaphor! Really insightful. I love your inspiration for it. Your melody is beautiful and your gentle finger picking and strum and gorgeous vocals deliver it so well. I love your chorus! Lovely song!

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Very pretty song. I like the extended metaphor in the lyrics, and they are beautifully sung here. I really enjoyed it.

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