Wonderful loop. The blues comes through in your vocals. This is song has come together extremely well. Just shows how simplicity is many times the key to make something really resonant. A great success!

love the looping and the contrast between the fast background "bits and pieces" and the slow pace of the chorus lyric

This song is so charming. The loop, the song and that touch of vibraphone really brought it together.

I dig the background loop you built. But what I really dig, is how you sang that nice bluesy vocal melody over it! Great take on the prompt and a very enjoyable listen! Cheers!

Great use of the loops. I love the bbbb as though even the bits are in bits.

Ooh I love how you've used the loops here, sounds really original and exciting to listen to. Especially like the harmonised vocals, but kudos too for each building block you add. And that's before I even get to the lyrics... what a cracking write this is 😃

You have done a phenomenal job with the loops - really effective bits. I love the sandpaper blocks, the marimba, and the background loops with your gorgeous vocals delivering the well crafted pointed lyrics. Cool jazzy feel and nice juxtaposition of joyful music with the lyric.

Really interesting cross between blues and something else that I can't quite put my finger on (or it could be old ladies dull brain syndrome lol). Love it :)

Nice lament, and a scary moment. Really impressive sound for an impromptu flow.

Very inventive to have the 'bits and pieces' playing on loop in the background - very effective! And I love the bluesy nature of the song. Sounds really good