Forgiveness ❤️
by @tcelliott
Liner Notes
#singersongwriter #acousticonetake
Another one for Phoebe
Lyrics
I've been waiting for this moment Waiting for this moment with you I've been aching for atonement Knowing exactly what to do
I'm asking you for forgiveness For all the stupid things I've done My good intentions are not enough And for excuses I have none
Time has passed but I'm still here I am here for what you may need I've made mistakes year after year But know that I have always believed
I'm asking you for forgiveness For all the stupid things I've done My good intentions are not enough And for excuses I have none
Years still drift away too quickly If you blink then they are all gone All the good times pass too swiftly Fading like the starlight with the dawn
I'm asking you for forgiveness For all the stupid things I've done My good intentions are not enough And for excuses I have none
Comments
The sincerity and insight creates such a touching lyric. Your guitar is lovely and the melody is beautifully delivered with you gentle heartfelt vocals.
The descending guitar line coming in straight from the intro is great, feels like a whole band in itself. I think the lyrics work really well with their direct to the point honesty.
It's never too late to say sorry, especially when they are heartfelt. This is so lovely. The guitar is beautiful and really like the rhythm of the vocals. Not sure he deserves total forgiveness, but this song makes me want to forgive him ;)
Just beautiful...I wish someone would write songs for me like this. It says everything it needs to say for an apology and also a re-affirmation of commitment to one's spouse. Lovely
Ooh...that guitar is so warm and inviting...and then the vocal comes in sweet and earnest. This is like some undiscovered Jim Croce song