Love the full production here, sounds good. The line "Every time you leave him / You grieve a little less" is so intriguing and really sets the rest of the song up. And then in the chorus "For you to wake and wonder / Why you found me there", love that. So good, what a great idea. I like the word cameo. I feel like it has been ruined for me by the commercial service where you pay celebrities to read a short script for you. So in that regard, I like it in the song a lot, we need more of this and less of that. A cameo in a dream, what a cool thought. I will say I was thrown off by the line "Stuff as trivial as this", as it doesn't feel trivial at all, but maybe I'm just missing it (i will be stewing on this one for a while i think). Also, the bridge sounded great, and the "bloom like a rose / reaching for the rain" is great.

Wow, Jeff - what an inventive love song. I know how powerful having someone show up in dreams in a spot they don’t belong can really be the thin edge of a life-changing wedge. The lyric feels so sure and the harmonies feel like the dream of togetherness.

Love this one 👏

Very poignant. Who hasn't felt unrequited love?

I really like this, Jeff. It's a bit out of your "usual" (whatever that is these days...) but that soothing tone you give to your vocals here is super relaxing. I wasn't able to get in any listening the first two weeks and I see you have given me some catching up to do!

A song that just transports and transfixes...you've got such a rich voice and the production is perfection!

Lovely song. I don't know the Paper Kites (I'll go and listen after this) but I hear echoes of other great Australians, the Triffids and Go Betweens. Great to hear a big production.

One of your best. I think I've mentioned that BIAB is what I use for my own backgrounds--been using it since 1992. You've got the skills down--a really terrific arrangement! And, that vocal... ❤️

I love how the Chorus comes in...so dreamy. And the story is right up my alley. Nice work.

Beautiful romantic song, singing and playing. So wonderful to listen to. Warm and welcoming.

Simply beautiful. Bravo! Wonderful vocal, along with top-notch performance & an excellent mix.

Yes lovely and wistful, nostalgic, romantic. ‘Cameo in your dreams’ is a great concept and sentiment. My favourite line is ‘like a rose reaching for the rain’. Awesome

Lovely romantic song. Your vocals are tight and your lyrics are welcoming. Good stuff for your second song here today! :)

Beautiful lyrics so romantically sung! Love this!

this is super romantic. the chorus is brilliant, with one of those lines that is so spot on that it is a wonder nobody thought of it before. the production is so slow and relaxed. this is a song to win the heart of any girl so disposed.

Twangtastic! Nice production and no need to rationalize anything. We’re all here for the fun and the ride full of new and wonderful sounds. Nice song!

Okay, you definitely have a new fan. This is wonderful, I love it.