Eagle Stone
by @berni1954
Liner Notes
This song was written for the Brewer's Droop challenge. The prompt I received was "Eagle Stone" - I had never heard of this folk remedy for childlessness, but apparently it was a procedure as old as the Ancient Greeks... and perhaps before them.
I read up about it yesterday and this morning I was lying in bed imagining who today might be desperate enough to try this ancient remedy. The characters Bertha and Werner just came into my head and the story just wrote itself after that. No idea why the protagonists were German, perhaps as a contrast between German Rationalism and superstition. Thank you anyway, Ms Muse. 😉
I had planned to get in the song the idea that Bertha was aware of the "birth" within her name and the irony that she was finding it hard to bring a pregnancy to full term. But in the end it just seemed to interfere with the narrative and I abandoned the idea.
Instrument: Baton Rouge Parlour Guitar (great value for money instrument!)
Lyrics
Bertha and Werner had left it late To think of having a child With her in her thirties by nature's mandate She felt compelled though reconciled But miscarriages plagued them and after the fifth It seemed that it wasn't to be Then in desperation she turned to the occult Though she knew there was no guarantee
I'll carry you within me, oh longed for child I'll bear you on eagles' wings You'll be my miracle, oh my sweet love To her unborn child Bertha sings
She was told of the Eagle Stone by a good friend Of Pliny, Theophrastus and others An iron-heavy stone that rattled when shook That protected expectant mothers They paid a small fortune for an amulet The size of a walnut it was Werner was sceptical, but Bertha said: "It's our last chance before menopause!"
CHORUS
For months she wore it on her left arm As the child within her grew A healthy young girl the ultrasound said She prayed that her wish would come true She moved the amulet to her hips as her contractions came As the instruction booklet advised It all went smoothly and in homage to that stone Their daughter, as Petra, was baptised
I carried you within me, oh longed for child I bore you on eagles' wings You were my miracle, oh my sweet love To her daughter Bertha sings
Three Chord Trick in G
Comments
Lovely song and a great story to hear. The ultrasound mention pulled me out a bit. I imagined an old village and a maybe like a witch or magic woman. Then modern medicine was there!
Love the song!
Lovely storytelling, you sound a bit like Ronnie Drew from the Dubliners without the Dublin accent obviously. Good job
Well, I have learned something from this. Whatever works! Or believing in it made some physical change; we don’t understand our bodies well
Lovely folk song and a happy ending yay! The wish for children to some is consuming so know surprise what lengths people would go to!
im glad he song has a happy ending. the song is so pretty and rocks back and forth like a lullaby. it would have been a pity to end in a miscarriage instead of a baby carriage.
Hi Berni, well done for making a ballad from the prompt, the chorus works particularly well - glad for a happy ending to the tale 😊
I didn’t read the lyrics or notes before I listened so it was wonderful to hear this story unfold. Told so beautifully and the baby name was such a well thought detail.