My Nights With My Nights

by @charlie_leemburg

Skirmish: my nights with ___ (@fairplay)
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Liner Notes

well it is really night for me writing this

Lyrics

My nights with my nights with only myself Are what keep me awake as I lose all else I’ll be here till I wake, till I drift away If you wish you’d be here you would not wish to stay

My nights with my nights filled with complaining It’s quite restraining, though I blame myself If I weren’t dreaming I’d be someone else And I’d have to rethink the things that made sense

My nights with my nights that I keep in a list Each more surprising than I could wish If we party all night then what fills the day? If the nap was alright will the rest be okay?

Comments

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@tjeff

Cool title and hook. I like the line "if I weren't dreaming I'd be someone else." Good skirmish.

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The lyric feels like it stacks on itself. Like late night anxiety.

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Lots of interesting lines that evoke a feeling of insomnia born out of a lot of emotion welling up from the days. Interesting concept.

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I like that nights with my nights cadence as the start of each stanza … it is really effective. And I agree with Val on the power of that line she notes. Wonderful skirmish response.

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@val

"If you wish you’d be here you would not wish to stay" That is such a striking line. It has a lot of weight. There's really lots to unpack in this lyric. It's quite intriguing.

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...yep - we've just passed midnight and with the day ending this Skirmish also ends...

...this works as a poem too - hope you'll find the time to put a melody under or over it - i'd be curious - nicely done...

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