Two Hands but One Heart
by @andrea
Liner Notes
I wrote this with the intention of a collab on SC. I was supposed to write something based loosely on an old German fairy tale by the Brothers Grimm called "Jorinde and Joringel". We ended up going with some other lyrics of mine, so I decided to finish it anyway for FAWM. I'm not sure it's actually "finished", but it's close.
This is meant to be a duet with the chorus sung by both the man and woman together.
Feel free to offer suggestions for improvement.
Please let me know if you would be interested in collaborating on this piece :)
Lyrics
Let’s walk through the forest And talk of our dreams About love beyond boundaries Under a canopy of trees
With your hand in mine We’ll blaze our own trail Through warm winds that blow And cold winter snow
Through good times and sorrow Wherever we go
No darkness can conceal The light in our hearts No power too strong That can keep us apart No time so long to make us forget We’re two hands, but/and one heart
Sunlight through the leaves Cast shadows around A flicker of panic My heart races quicker
Wherever you are I will never be far Know fear can’t control The magic of our souls
So, grip my hand tight Everything will be alright
No darkness can conceal The light in our hearts No power too strong That can keep us apart No time so long to make us forget We’re two hands, but one heart
I look in your eyes As our fingers entwine And I believe Your love is all that I need
I look in your eyes And I see Eternity
No darkness can conceal The light in our hearts No power too strong That can keep us apart No time so long to make us forget We’re two hands, but one heart
Comments
This does have a forest feel, Andrea. So crisp and clean and soft too. You can hear the chorus quietly soaring.
Simple but very effective lyric, with a relatable theme. I'm glad you "finished" this one!
Oh wow, I love these lyrics and your vision for the song. I can almost hear it. I love how the use of imagery grounds and provides a setting the song. I don't think I have time to work on them this FAWM but I would love to hear it.
Beautiful love song lyric! “Two hands, one heart” is a strong image, and I like how you use the hand imagery in other places throughout the song too.
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Beautiful lyrics Andrea. Loving and sincere. I'm looking forward to hearing them.
What a great lyric, Andrea! Filled with imagery that takes us there. I especially like the way you set the stage with the first two lines. Nice writing!
Hi Andrea - I’m very late to the FAWM party, but if I get some time in the next few days would you be happy for me to try something with these lovely words?
Lovely lyrics--now I really want to hear them set to music. Great job! ❤️
WoW... great write Andrea... wonderful imagery, emotive in such a pure and true light, love the forest trek and the two hands one heart line is soooo good, that such a grabber! Can't wait to hear it! The ability to count on the comfort of unconditional love is such a wonderful feeling of security!
That is a powerful and unconditional love song you’ve written. Committed lovers bound by romantic bonds of care and affection.
Didn't you get this "musicated" - the lyrics ring a bell! PS Ah, I see you did and I listened and commented too...