Very catchy tune! An alternate to the woman scorned themes. “When a man’s love is betrayed / It turns straight into hate.” Great job of building the scenario into the, er, punchline, so to speak. Sorry not sorry about the mess.

This song was very smooth, great dramatic progression and neatly composed. No messes here.

This is great - Got my vote on SongFight. Thanks for your comment on mine - Honestly I thought I had missed the SF deadline, and by the time I realized I hadn't, I had.

Thanks for your comment on Information Machines. It was m6 goal to make a couple of videos this year. The source audio and visual material is so rich and often dictates the nature of the music even though I make the video after the track.

Enjoyed this tale of deception and heartbreak. Nice production too. I especially enjoyed when the guitar lead came in around 1:23 and the same for the piano later in the piece.

The music video I am imagining for this song is WILD! IN a salon, shots are fired! Lots of cowboys 🤠 haha Great stuff.

Oh, this is dark. In a wry, Han-Solo-in-the-cantina sort of way. Great title, great writing, and the arrangement really picks up the tale and runs with it. This is a keeper!

So catchy! And ouch indeed, been there... (though I definitely didn't have the niceness to take the blame when it wasn't mine 😅).

Really enjoy your vocals, and the arrangement is great, with the outro really bringing the incoming mess into focus with the ominous vibe.

dang. not what i expected. really well done! love those guitars. excellent vocals and hard hitting lyrics. last line of the chorus hits just right. yes.

Ouch!!!! This burns. And this chorus really grabs the attention and doesn't let go. Great story (hope it's not true). So many great lyrics, and the production is so good! I love pretty much everything about this.

Loved these lines: I hope he sees your shovel looking old/Sees how many times you've been digging for gold. 😀 And the capper: "And you need to give me back that engagement ring." Nice work!

Not really my type of music, but I left this playing in the background and was kind of bummed that it ended! That little solo at the end is cool.

This is a great story. I am reading the bridge is where he conjured the mess. Gossip is as good as gold. Love the melodies and vocals. Cool song!