Foragin' For The Origin (Comments First Song)
by @wobbiewobbit · @blakeravemusic
Liner Notes
This song is for the #CommentsFirst challenge (https://write.fawm.org/forums/3025). It was written based on the first five comments below before being locked.
@blakeravemusic and i had worked loads on it but failed to get it in any shape to upload the demo in time for the close of FAWM. I found i wanted to carry on wrestling this Monster Of Chaos the next day so i did anyway and thought you might wanna hear it too! So getting a little post FAWM bonus in ;) #trippy #psychedelic #experimental
Comments
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This is hilarious and creepy at the same time...I'm feeling kind of dizzy and can't think of the word DELIRIOUS that's it. Pass the mushrooms, you two....I am going to have some really bizarre dreams if I stop listening and go to sleep. CAKE CAKE CAKE Bagpipes....Real? What is this real of which you speak? Pass the shiny orange mushmelons...
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This is wild!! LOVE IT!! Is someone yelling "Hey!! Cake!!" ?
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A brutal set of comments and you did a wonderful job. I genuinely laughed out loud in places, and the banjo/pipes combo can't fail.
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You two really managed to put this together into a coherent piece. There's so much going on, and it sounds like you have fun with it, no matter how difficult it was to do.
No one told me there would be cake!
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wow, this is a mood. you got a challenging set of prompts to try and weave together here but the end result nails the brief and sound really good! all the ear candy panning around...
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For The Win! Ok, this is setting off flashbacks from things I should have stayed away from in the 70s but awesome on every other level. What WAS in that cake 😀 So glad you persisted 😎
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Ah, this is brilliant! Genius! So glad you finished and published this, Den! So good!
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Brilliant work. That’s my go to wire for anything Wobbie. Very cosmic and free floating. I enjoyed listening for all the elements that I knew were coming. The animal noise were a highlight but the buzzing bee was my favorite. I felt like I was getting dive bombed from left to right over and over again!!!
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the section where you just imitated animals a buzzing bee was super unexpected but also worked waaaaaay better than I anticipated
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just when the song seems to end, the bass swings around and takes it to another level
Banjo and bagpipes in the same song! That is a bold move 😎
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Wow. I was positive you couldn't rhyme "orange"!
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You’ve really got that royal family voice down to a tee, it sounds just like, well you know who!
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Really fun vivid track... feels like being at a festival near woods, listening to three stages at once, people milling around in various states with dogs and bees attracted by cake....