Focus
by @jeremykazoo
Liner Notes
Don't lose sight. It's more than meets the eye.
Lyrics
I gotta focus On one thing at a time Peripheral distractions And broken vision cloud my mind
My glasses broken I'm filled with dread A swirling world Lies in the fog ahead
I gotta focus On one thing at a time I can't go chasing rabbits While I'm blind
I can't stride forward All I see is fear My sight has been blurred By the spectacle before me here.
Comments
Almost hypnotic. I really enjoyed the variety or rhythms at play. Rock on!
"I cant go chasing rabbits while I'm blind" are words to live by, especially for one with the attention span I have. First things first! This is fun, I love the kazoo and the tone of the electric. The kazoo could almost represent a buzzing in the brain.
Proof that you can write a compelling song with only two chords! The kazoo is a nice touch, almost trumpet-like. Congratulations on completing your first FAWM!
Simple and sweet! It's both full of metaphors while also possibly being about exactly what it sounds like.
Wow, the kazoo sounds so mournful. Thought provoking lyrics and as other have mentioned, a hypnotic two chord song.