Focus

by @jeremykazoo

Liner Notes

Don't lose sight. It's more than meets the eye.

#kazoo #singersongwriter

Lyrics

I gotta focus On one thing at a time Peripheral distractions And broken vision cloud my mind

My glasses broken I'm filled with dread A swirling world Lies in the fog ahead

I gotta focus On one thing at a time I can't go chasing rabbits While I'm blind

I can't stride forward All I see is fear My sight has been blurred By the spectacle before me here.

Comments

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Wow, the kazoo sounds so mournful. Thought provoking lyrics and as other have mentioned, a hypnotic two chord song.

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@regis

Almost hypnotic. I really enjoyed the variety or rhythms at play. Rock on!

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@cathreu

"I cant go chasing rabbits while I'm blind" are words to live by, especially for one with the attention span I have. First things first! This is fun, I love the kazoo and the tone of the electric. The kazoo could almost represent a buzzing in the brain.

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Proof that you can write a compelling song with only two chords! The kazoo is a nice touch, almost trumpet-like. Congratulations on completing your first FAWM!

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Simple and sweet! It's both full of metaphors while also possibly being about exactly what it sounds like.

[FAWM]